Tuesday, June 5, 2007
Hamad' blog
Today, I am going to talk about my life with, and what is happened with me since when i was little girl. My name is Sophie, i have three sisters, and the misfortune, i am the oldest one from my sisteres. My mother died when i was two years old, and my sister Lettie was one year, so this the sorrow time for us. When my mother died, my father married his assistant in his shop. My father sent my sisters and i to the best school in town, and i was very studious. I repair my sisters' clothes, and i mad some for them. one day a story start, and many people being talking of ''the Witch of the Waste''. After three monthes, big castle suddenly came out, and on the turrets blowing black smoke. the castle was moving , and sometimes it was tall and black smudge on moors.
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All the three chapters included. Good understanding of the story. good discription of Sofie point of view.
You have a misfutune future because you are the oldest of your sisters. That's too bad. But, you are industrious, so I hope that you could change your future by yourself. The Witch of the Waste looks very scarely, I think. So, be careful.
I really feel sympathy with your unhappy life. I think the most hard happening was your father`s death. Because you don`t have mother and also you are the first-born daughter, I think you have to not only endure the sorrow but look after your younger sisters. There ware some misfortunes in your life, but I hope you will have a lot of happiness.
1/2: 2 paragraphs
3/3: Stays in character.
5/5: Vocabulary
Total: 9/10
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